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场景 05 · 18 分钟费城故事 · Philadelphia
The settlement-decision brief 场景学习单
本场重点:重大诉讼和解前把金额、保密、非金钱条款、执行风险和客户决定权放在同一页
01
理解
先读场景与人物目标,不逐词翻译。
02
遮挡复述
遮住中文,用英文复述关键意思。
03
迁移表达
把高价值表达改写到自己的情境。
语言观察
“Counsel recommends; the client decides after seeing what each option gives up.” 律师提供建议,客户在理解取舍后决定。
Read and notice
原创双语场景
INT. LAW OFFICE — EVENING
内景 · 律师事务所 · 傍晚
A settlement offer and a trial calendar are reduced to two parallel columns.
一份和解要约和庭审日程被整理成并列两栏。
LAWYER
This amount is strong. Accept it tonight before the other side withdraws.
这个金额很好,今晚就在对方撤回前接受。
CLIENT
Counsel recommends; the client decides after seeing what each option gives up.
律师提出建议;客户在看到每个选项放弃什么后作决定。
LAWYER
Settlement pays now but limits public statements; trial preserves a public ruling but adds delay, cost and uncertainty.
和解立即付款但限制公开发言;庭审保留公开裁决机会,却增加延误、成本和不确定性。
CLIENT
Request policy training, a neutral reference and narrower confidentiality, then bring me the written response tomorrow.
要求政策培训、中立推荐和更窄的保密范围,明天把书面回复带给我。
The group returns to the opening concern—“This amount is strong. Accept it tonight before the other side withdraws.”—and compares it with the later response before closing the scene.
众人重新审视开场问题——“这个金额很好,今晚就在对方撤回前接受。”——并在结束场景前把它与后续回应进行比较。
LAWYER
Which part is a request, which part is permission, and what may be refused or withdrawn without losing an existing right?
哪一部分是请求,哪一部分是许可,又有哪些内容可以拒绝或撤回而不失去现有权利?
CLIENT
Permission will name its scope, audience, duration, storage, withdrawal route, and the consequence of saying no.
许可会写明范围、受众、期限、保存方式、撤回渠道,以及拒绝会产生什么后果。
Two phrases remain visible on the shared note: “after seeing what each option gives up” and “preserves a public ruling,” each linked to the exact line that gives it force in the discussion.
共用记录上保留两个表达:“after seeing what each option gives up”(在看清每个选项的放弃事项后)与“preserves a public ruling”(保留公开裁决机会),并分别连接到赋予其讨论力量的原句。
LAWYER
An independent person will check that silence was not treated as agreement and that no benefit depends on continued permission.
由独立人员检查沉默是否被误当成同意,以及任何福利是否以持续许可为条件。
The longer passage separates relationship, request, permission, refusal, and repair instead of compressing them into one yes.
加长段落把关系、请求、许可、拒绝和补救分别展开,不再压缩成一个笼统的“同意”。
A second pass through “The settlement-decision brief” slows the exchange where “This amount is strong. Accept it tonight before the other side withdraws.” still leaves motive, consequence, or responsibility unstated.
第二轮细读“The settlement-decision brief”时,交流在“这个金额很好,今晚就在对方撤回前接受。”仍未说明动机、后果或责任的位置慢下来。
CLIENT
What information would change the decision, who benefits from agreement, and can refusal remain safe, private, and free of retaliation?
什么信息会改变决定,谁会从同意中受益,而拒绝是否仍能保持安全、私密且不受报复?
LAWYER
The explanation will cover purpose, alternatives, foreseeable effects, data use, expiration, withdrawal, and the contact responsible for correction.
说明会覆盖目的、替代方案、可预见影响、数据用途、到期时间、撤回方式和负责纠正的联系人。
The speakers test how “after seeing what each option gives up” changes the force of “narrower confidentiality,” then restate the distinction without relying on either phrase.
说话者检验“after seeing what each option gives up”(在看清每个选项的放弃事项后)如何改变“narrower confidentiality”(范围更窄的保密条款)的语气力度,然后不依赖这两个短语重新说明区别。
LAWYER
A signature can document a decision, but it cannot repair missing information, hidden pressure, or an unusable withdrawal route.
签名可以记录决定,却无法弥补信息缺失、隐性压力或无法使用的撤回渠道。
CLIENT
We will pause the request, provide the missing details in plain language, and ask again only after independent questions are possible.
我们会暂停请求,用清楚的语言补齐细节,并只在对方能够独立提问后再次询问。
They rehearse one careful version, one direct version, and one version for a listener who enters late, checking that “preserves a public ruling” still leads to the same next step.
他们分别排练谨慎版、直接版和面向迟到听众的版本,检查“preserves a public ruling”(保留公开裁决机会)是否仍然导向同一个下一步。
Before the scene closes, “after seeing what each option gives up” and “narrower confidentiality” are placed beside the unresolved pressure in “The settlement-decision brief,” giving the speakers one more round to challenge, concede, reframe, and hand off the decision.
场景结束前,“after seeing what each option gives up”(在看清每个选项的放弃事项后)与“narrower confidentiality”(范围更窄的保密条款)被放回“The settlement-decision brief”尚未解决的压力旁,让说话者再完成一轮质疑、让步、重述与交接。
LAWYER
If saying no changes access, status, safety, or the relationship, how can we claim the answer is voluntary, and what must change before asking again?
如果拒绝会改变机会、身份、安全或关系,我们凭什么说回答是自愿的,又必须先改变什么才能再次询问?
CLIENT
I accept that an earlier yes may document one moment, but it does not cover a new audience, a longer duration, hidden pressure, or a changed purpose.
我承认先前的同意只能记录一个时刻,不能覆盖新的受众、更长期限、隐性压力或已经改变的目的。
LAWYER
Then permission will be specific, informed, reversible, and separate from unrelated benefits, with silence treated as a reason to pause rather than agreement.
那么许可必须具体、知情、可撤回,并与无关利益分开;沉默应被视为暂停理由,而不是同意。
LAWYER
I will pass on the approved scope, excluded uses, expiration, withdrawal route, and correction contact so no later participant has to guess what was allowed.
我会交接获准范围、排除用途、到期时间、撤回渠道和纠正联系人,让后来的参与者无需猜测哪些内容曾被允许。
The longer dialogue now leaves “The settlement-decision brief” with an acknowledged objection, a revised frame, a named owner, and a handoff that can be checked after the conversation ends.
更长的对话让“The settlement-decision brief”在结束时留下已被承认的异议、经过修订的框架、具名负责人,以及能在谈话结束后继续核验的交接。
The fuller scene treats consent as an informed, reversible process rather than a single line of approval.
更完整的场景把同意视为知情且可撤回的过程,而不是一句单独的批准。
The unsigned offer leaves with three requested changes and a client decision deadline.
未签要约附上三项修改要求和客户决定期限后送出。
Useful language
高价值表达
after seeing what each option gives up
/ˈæftər ˈsiːɪŋ wʌt iːtʃ ˈɑːpʃən ɡɪvz ʌp/
在看清每个选项的放弃事项后
把建议转化为清楚的取舍比较。
我的例句
preserves a public ruling
/prɪˈzɜːrvz ə ˈpʌblɪk ˈruːlɪŋ/
保留公开裁决机会
说明继续诉讼可能带来的非金钱价值。
我的例句
narrower confidentiality
/ˈnæroʊər ˌkɑːnfɪˌdenʃiˈæləti/
范围更窄的保密条款
避免保密义务超过解决争议所需范围。
我的例句
输出练习
1. 用 2 句英文概括场景中的沟通问题。
2. 选一个高价值表达,改写成你本周可能真正使用的句子。
3. 如果你是场景中的另一方,你会怎样回应?
我能说清场景目标
我能复述关键台词
我写了自己的例句