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场景 04 · 18 分钟公园与游憩 · Parks and Recreation
The public procurement review 场景学习单
本场重点:公共项目采购中预先发布需求与评分、披露关系、统一答疑、记录选择理由,并让存在利益冲突者回避
01
理解
先读场景与人物目标,不逐词翻译。
02
遮挡复述
遮住中文,用英文复述关键意思。
03
迁移表达
把高价值表达改写到自己的情境。
语言观察
“A good local vendor still needs a fair public process.” 本地供应商再优秀,也需要公平的公共流程。
Read and notice
原创双语场景
INT. CITY PROCUREMENT OFFICE — MORNING
内景 · 市政采购办公室 · 上午
A project team wants to award a park contract to a familiar business before other bids arrive.
一个项目团队想在其他投标到达前,把公园合同授予熟悉的企业。
PROJECT LEAD
They are local, reliable and ready today. Competition will only delay a small project.
他们是本地企业,可靠而且今天就能开工。竞争只会拖慢一个小项目。
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
A good local vendor still needs a fair public process.
一家优秀的本地供应商,仍然需要经过公平的公共流程。
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
Publish the scope, budget, deadline and weighted criteria, then give every bidder the same written answers.
公布工作范围、预算、截止时间和加权标准,再向每位投标者提供相同的书面答复。
PROJECT LEAD
I will disclose my prior work with the vendor and leave scoring to three reviewers with recorded reasons.
我会披露过去与该供应商的合作,并把评分交给三名记录理由的评审者。
The group returns to the opening concern—“They are local, reliable and ready today. Competition will only delay a small project.”—and compares it with the later response before closing the scene.
众人重新审视开场问题——“他们是本地企业,可靠而且今天就能开工。竞争只会拖慢一个小项目。”——并在结束场景前把它与后续回应进行比较。
PROJECT LEAD
Which part is a request, which part is permission, and what may be refused or withdrawn without losing an existing right?
哪一部分是请求,哪一部分是许可,又有哪些内容可以拒绝或撤回而不失去现有权利?
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
Permission will name its scope, audience, duration, storage, withdrawal route, and the consequence of saying no.
许可会写明范围、受众、期限、保存方式、撤回渠道,以及拒绝会产生什么后果。
Two phrases remain visible on the shared note: “weighted criteria” and “the same written answers,” each linked to the exact line that gives it force in the discussion.
共用记录上保留两个表达:“weighted criteria”(加权评审标准)与“the same written answers”(相同的书面答复),并分别连接到赋予其讨论力量的原句。
PROJECT LEAD
An independent person will check that silence was not treated as agreement and that no benefit depends on continued permission.
由独立人员检查沉默是否被误当成同意,以及任何福利是否以持续许可为条件。
The longer passage separates relationship, request, permission, refusal, and repair instead of compressing them into one yes.
加长段落把关系、请求、许可、拒绝和补救分别展开,不再压缩成一个笼统的“同意”。
A second pass through “The public procurement review” slows the exchange where “They are local, reliable and ready today. Competition will only delay a small project.” still leaves motive, consequence, or responsibility unstated.
第二轮细读“The public procurement review”时,交流在“他们是本地企业,可靠而且今天就能开工。竞争只会拖慢一个小项目。”仍未说明动机、后果或责任的位置慢下来。
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
What information would change the decision, who benefits from agreement, and can refusal remain safe, private, and free of retaliation?
什么信息会改变决定,谁会从同意中受益,而拒绝是否仍能保持安全、私密且不受报复?
PROJECT LEAD
The explanation will cover purpose, alternatives, foreseeable effects, data use, expiration, withdrawal, and the contact responsible for correction.
说明会覆盖目的、替代方案、可预见影响、数据用途、到期时间、撤回方式和负责纠正的联系人。
The speakers test how “weighted criteria” changes the force of “leave scoring to,” then restate the distinction without relying on either phrase.
说话者检验“weighted criteria”(加权评审标准)如何改变“leave scoring to”(把评分交由)的语气力度,然后不依赖这两个短语重新说明区别。
PROJECT LEAD
A signature can document a decision, but it cannot repair missing information, hidden pressure, or an unusable withdrawal route.
签名可以记录决定,却无法弥补信息缺失、隐性压力或无法使用的撤回渠道。
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
We will pause the request, provide the missing details in plain language, and ask again only after independent questions are possible.
我们会暂停请求,用清楚的语言补齐细节,并只在对方能够独立提问后再次询问。
They rehearse one careful version, one direct version, and one version for a listener who enters late, checking that “the same written answers” still leads to the same next step.
他们分别排练谨慎版、直接版和面向迟到听众的版本,检查“the same written answers”(相同的书面答复)是否仍然导向同一个下一步。
Before the scene closes, “weighted criteria” and “leave scoring to” are placed beside the unresolved pressure in “The public procurement review,” giving the speakers one more round to challenge, concede, reframe, and hand off the decision.
场景结束前,“weighted criteria”(加权评审标准)与“leave scoring to”(把评分交由)被放回“The public procurement review”尚未解决的压力旁,让说话者再完成一轮质疑、让步、重述与交接。
PROJECT LEAD
If saying no changes access, status, safety, or the relationship, how can we claim the answer is voluntary, and what must change before asking again?
如果拒绝会改变机会、身份、安全或关系,我们凭什么说回答是自愿的,又必须先改变什么才能再次询问?
PROCUREMENT OFFICER
I accept that an earlier yes may document one moment, but it does not cover a new audience, a longer duration, hidden pressure, or a changed purpose.
我承认先前的同意只能记录一个时刻,不能覆盖新的受众、更长期限、隐性压力或已经改变的目的。
PROJECT LEAD
Then permission will be specific, informed, reversible, and separate from unrelated benefits, with silence treated as a reason to pause rather than agreement.
那么许可必须具体、知情、可撤回,并与无关利益分开;沉默应被视为暂停理由,而不是同意。
PROJECT LEAD
I will pass on the approved scope, excluded uses, expiration, withdrawal route, and correction contact so no later participant has to guess what was allowed.
我会交接获准范围、排除用途、到期时间、撤回渠道和纠正联系人,让后来的参与者无需猜测哪些内容曾被允许。
The longer dialogue now leaves “The public procurement review” with an acknowledged objection, a revised frame, a named owner, and a handoff that can be checked after the conversation ends.
更长的对话让“The public procurement review”在结束时留下已被承认的异议、经过修订的框架、具名负责人,以及能在谈话结束后继续核验的交接。
The fuller scene treats consent as an informed, reversible process rather than a single line of approval.
更完整的场景把同意视为知情且可撤回的过程,而不是一句单独的批准。
The award pauses until all compliant bids are compared and the decision summary can be published.
授标暂停,直到所有合规投标完成比较且决定摘要可以公开。
Useful language
高价值表达
weighted criteria
/ˈweɪtɪd kraɪˈtɪriə/
加权评审标准
提前说明价格、质量与交付等因素各占多少权重。
我的例句
the same written answers
/ðə seɪm ˈrɪtən ˈænsərz/
相同的书面答复
避免某一投标者获得其他人没有的信息。
我的例句
leave scoring to
/liːv ˈskɔːrɪŋ tə/
把评分交由
存在私人关系时退出实际评价过程。
我的例句
输出练习
1. 用 2 句英文概括场景中的沟通问题。
2. 选一个高价值表达,改写成你本周可能真正使用的句子。
3. 如果你是场景中的另一方,你会怎样回应?
我能说清场景目标
我能复述关键台词
我写了自己的例句