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场景 06 · 20 分钟性别为本 · On the Basis of Sex
The narrow question 场景学习单
本场重点:面对不利先例时缩小争点、承认边界并给出可判决的比较,使宏大价值诉求落到具体规则
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理解
先读场景与人物目标,不逐词翻译。
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遮挡复述
遮住中文,用英文复述关键意思。
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迁移表达
把高价值表达改写到自己的情境。
语言观察
“Do not ask the court to approve the whole future.” 用 do not ask 限定请求尺度,随后把讨论引向一个能够由当前证据回答的狭窄问题。
Read and notice
原创双语场景
INT. MOOT COURT CLASSROOM — EVENING
内景 · 模拟法庭教室 · 晚上
A draft argument promises equal treatment everywhere, while the cited precedent supports the challenged rule.
论证草稿承诺在所有领域实现平等对待,但引用的先例却支持当前被挑战的规则。
ADVOCATE
The rule belongs to a history of unequal treatment, so the court should reject the entire framework.
这项规则属于不平等对待的历史,因此法院应否定整个框架。
MOOT JUDGE
The precedent accepts part of that framework. What exact question can we decide without pretending it vanished?
先例接受了那个框架的一部分。我们能决定哪个确切问题,而不假装先例已经消失?
CO-COUNSEL
Do not ask the court to approve the whole future; ask it to examine this unequal rule.
不要要求法院批准整个未来;请它审查这一项不平等规则。
ADVOCATE
Then the question is why two people with the same duty receive different treatment under the same statute.
那么问题就是:为什么承担相同义务的两个人在同一法律下受到不同对待。
MOOT JUDGE
State what your argument does not require us to decide.
请说明你的论证不要求我们决定什么。
ADVOCATE
It does not decide every classification. It requires a relevant reason for this difference, and the record provides none.
它不决定所有分类问题。它只要求这项差别具有相关理由,而案卷中没有这样的理由。
CO-COUNSEL
Name the narrow remedy: apply the same eligibility test to both people and leave the broader framework for another case.
说明狭窄的补救方式:对两人适用相同资格标准,更广泛的框架留待其他案件处理。
The group returns to the opening concern—“The rule belongs to a history of unequal treatment, so the court should reject the entire framework.”—and compares it with the later response before closing the scene.
众人重新审视开场问题——“这项规则属于不平等对待的历史,因此法院应否定整个框架。”——并在结束场景前把它与后续回应进行比较。
ADVOCATE
Which part is a request, which part is permission, and what may be refused or withdrawn without losing an existing right?
哪一部分是请求,哪一部分是许可,又有哪些内容可以拒绝或撤回而不失去现有权利?
MOOT JUDGE
Permission will name its scope, audience, duration, storage, withdrawal route, and the consequence of saying no.
许可会写明范围、受众、期限、保存方式、撤回渠道,以及拒绝会产生什么后果。
Two phrases remain visible on the shared note: “what exact question” and “approve the whole future,” each linked to the exact line that gives it force in the discussion.
共用记录上保留两个表达:“what exact question”(哪个确切问题)与“approve the whole future”(批准整个未来),并分别连接到赋予其讨论力量的原句。
CO-COUNSEL
An independent person will check that silence was not treated as agreement and that no benefit depends on continued permission.
由独立人员检查沉默是否被误当成同意,以及任何福利是否以持续许可为条件。
The longer passage separates relationship, request, permission, refusal, and repair instead of compressing them into one yes.
加长段落把关系、请求、许可、拒绝和补救分别展开,不再压缩成一个笼统的“同意”。
A second pass through “The narrow question” slows the exchange where “The rule belongs to a history of unequal treatment, so the court should reject the entire framework.” still leaves motive, consequence, or responsibility unstated.
第二轮细读“The narrow question”时,交流在“这项规则属于不平等对待的历史,因此法院应否定整个框架。”仍未说明动机、后果或责任的位置慢下来。
MOOT JUDGE
What information would change the decision, who benefits from agreement, and can refusal remain safe, private, and free of retaliation?
什么信息会改变决定,谁会从同意中受益,而拒绝是否仍能保持安全、私密且不受报复?
ADVOCATE
The explanation will cover purpose, alternatives, foreseeable effects, data use, expiration, withdrawal, and the contact responsible for correction.
说明会覆盖目的、替代方案、可预见影响、数据用途、到期时间、撤回方式和负责纠正的联系人。
The speakers test how “what exact question” changes the force of “does not require us to decide,” then restate the distinction without relying on either phrase.
说话者检验“what exact question”(哪个确切问题)如何改变“does not require us to decide”(不要求我们决定)的语气力度,然后不依赖这两个短语重新说明区别。
CO-COUNSEL
A signature can document a decision, but it cannot repair missing information, hidden pressure, or an unusable withdrawal route.
签名可以记录决定,却无法弥补信息缺失、隐性压力或无法使用的撤回渠道。
MOOT JUDGE
We will pause the request, provide the missing details in plain language, and ask again only after independent questions are possible.
我们会暂停请求,用清楚的语言补齐细节,并只在对方能够独立提问后再次询问。
They rehearse one careful version, one direct version, and one version for a listener who enters late, checking that “approve the whole future” still leads to the same next step.
他们分别排练谨慎版、直接版和面向迟到听众的版本,检查“approve the whole future”(批准整个未来)是否仍然导向同一个下一步。
Before the scene closes, “what exact question” and “does not require us to decide” are placed beside the unresolved pressure in “The narrow question,” giving the speakers one more round to challenge, concede, reframe, and hand off the decision.
场景结束前,“what exact question”(哪个确切问题)与“does not require us to decide”(不要求我们决定)被放回“The narrow question”尚未解决的压力旁,让说话者再完成一轮质疑、让步、重述与交接。
ADVOCATE
If saying no changes access, status, safety, or the relationship, how can we claim the answer is voluntary, and what must change before asking again?
如果拒绝会改变机会、身份、安全或关系,我们凭什么说回答是自愿的,又必须先改变什么才能再次询问?
MOOT JUDGE
I accept that an earlier yes may document one moment, but it does not cover a new audience, a longer duration, hidden pressure, or a changed purpose.
我承认先前的同意只能记录一个时刻,不能覆盖新的受众、更长期限、隐性压力或已经改变的目的。
CO-COUNSEL
Then permission will be specific, informed, reversible, and separate from unrelated benefits, with silence treated as a reason to pause rather than agreement.
那么许可必须具体、知情、可撤回,并与无关利益分开;沉默应被视为暂停理由,而不是同意。
ADVOCATE
I will pass on the approved scope, excluded uses, expiration, withdrawal route, and correction contact so no later participant has to guess what was allowed.
我会交接获准范围、排除用途、到期时间、撤回渠道和纠正联系人,让后来的参与者无需猜测哪些内容曾被允许。
The longer dialogue now leaves “The narrow question” with an acknowledged objection, a revised frame, a named owner, and a handoff that can be checked after the conversation ends.
更长的对话让“The narrow question”在结束时留下已被承认的异议、经过修订的框架、具名负责人,以及能在谈话结束后继续核验的交接。
The fuller scene treats consent as an informed, reversible process rather than a single line of approval.
更完整的场景把同意视为知情且可撤回的过程,而不是一句单独的批准。
The sweeping first page becomes a four-part outline: comparison, missing reason, boundary, and remedy.
宏大的第一页变成四部分提纲:比较、缺失的理由、边界和补救。
Useful language
高价值表达
what exact question
/wʌt ɪɡˈzækt ˈkwestʃən/
哪个确切问题
把抽象争议压缩成当前法院能够回答的问题。
我的例句
approve the whole future
/əˈpruːv ðə hoʊl ˈfjuːtʃər/
批准整个未来
比喻一次案件承担过宽的制度改变。
我的例句
does not require us to decide
/dʌz nɑːt rɪˈkwaɪər ʌs tə dɪˈsaɪd/
不要求我们决定
主动声明论证边界能降低裁判者对外溢影响的担忧。
我的例句
the narrow remedy
/ðə ˈnæroʊ ˈremədi/
范围有限的补救
让请求与被证明的具体问题保持比例。
我的例句
输出练习
1. 用 2 句英文概括场景中的沟通问题。
2. 选一个高价值表达,改写成你本周可能真正使用的句子。
3. 如果你是场景中的另一方,你会怎样回应?
我能说清场景目标
我能复述关键台词
我写了自己的例句