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场景 05 · 18 分钟绛帐海堂春 · Born Yesterday
The public question 场景学习单
本场重点:在公开听证中用来源明确、范围清楚的问题追问权力关系,并要求留下书面答复
01
理解
先读场景与人物目标,不逐词翻译。
02
遮挡复述
遮住中文,用英文复述关键意思。
03
迁移表达
把高价值表达改写到自己的情境。
语言观察
“A clear question does not become naive because a powerful person dislikes it.” 权势者的不耐烦不能证明问题幼稚。
Read and notice
原创双语场景
INT. COMMITTEE HEARING — DAY
内景 · 委员会听证厅 · 日
A first-time witness places a contract, a registry extract and one written question before her.
首次出席听证的证人把合同、登记摘录和一道书面问题放在面前。
LOBBYIST
The arrangement is too complex for this hearing. Trust the experts.
这项安排对听证会来说太复杂了,请相信专家。
WITNESS
A clear question does not become naive because a powerful person dislikes it.
清楚的问题不会因为有权势的人不喜欢它就变得幼稚。
WITNESS
The registry says you control both companies. Who approved the price, and what independent valuation was used?
登记资料显示两家公司都由你控制。谁批准了价格,采用了哪份独立估值?
CHAIR
Answer now or submit the approving minutes and valuation in writing by Monday.
请现在回答,或在周一前书面提交批准会议记录和估值。
The group returns to the opening concern—“The arrangement is too complex for this hearing. Trust the experts.”—and compares it with the later response before closing the scene.
众人重新审视开场问题——“这项安排对听证会来说太复杂了,请相信专家。”——并在结束场景前把它与后续回应进行比较。
LOBBYIST
Which part is a request, which part is permission, and what may be refused or withdrawn without losing an existing right?
哪一部分是请求,哪一部分是许可,又有哪些内容可以拒绝或撤回而不失去现有权利?
WITNESS
Permission will name its scope, audience, duration, storage, withdrawal route, and the consequence of saying no.
许可会写明范围、受众、期限、保存方式、撤回渠道,以及拒绝会产生什么后果。
Two phrases remain visible on the shared note: “does not become naive” and “what independent valuation,” each linked to the exact line that gives it force in the discussion.
共用记录上保留两个表达:“does not become naive”(不会因此变得幼稚)与“what independent valuation”(采用了哪份独立估值),并分别连接到赋予其讨论力量的原句。
CHAIR
An independent person will check that silence was not treated as agreement and that no benefit depends on continued permission.
由独立人员检查沉默是否被误当成同意,以及任何福利是否以持续许可为条件。
The longer passage separates relationship, request, permission, refusal, and repair instead of compressing them into one yes.
加长段落把关系、请求、许可、拒绝和补救分别展开,不再压缩成一个笼统的“同意”。
A second pass through “The public question” slows the exchange where “The arrangement is too complex for this hearing. Trust the experts.” still leaves motive, consequence, or responsibility unstated.
第二轮细读“The public question”时,交流在“这项安排对听证会来说太复杂了,请相信专家。”仍未说明动机、后果或责任的位置慢下来。
WITNESS
What information would change the decision, who benefits from agreement, and can refusal remain safe, private, and free of retaliation?
什么信息会改变决定,谁会从同意中受益,而拒绝是否仍能保持安全、私密且不受报复?
LOBBYIST
The explanation will cover purpose, alternatives, foreseeable effects, data use, expiration, withdrawal, and the contact responsible for correction.
说明会覆盖目的、替代方案、可预见影响、数据用途、到期时间、撤回方式和负责纠正的联系人。
The speakers test how “does not become naive” changes the force of “submit the approving minutes,” then restate the distinction without relying on either phrase.
说话者检验“does not become naive”(不会因此变得幼稚)如何改变“submit the approving minutes”(提交批准会议记录)的语气力度,然后不依赖这两个短语重新说明区别。
CHAIR
A signature can document a decision, but it cannot repair missing information, hidden pressure, or an unusable withdrawal route.
签名可以记录决定,却无法弥补信息缺失、隐性压力或无法使用的撤回渠道。
WITNESS
We will pause the request, provide the missing details in plain language, and ask again only after independent questions are possible.
我们会暂停请求,用清楚的语言补齐细节,并只在对方能够独立提问后再次询问。
They rehearse one careful version, one direct version, and one version for a listener who enters late, checking that “what independent valuation” still leads to the same next step.
他们分别排练谨慎版、直接版和面向迟到听众的版本,检查“what independent valuation”(采用了哪份独立估值)是否仍然导向同一个下一步。
Before the scene closes, “does not become naive” and “submit the approving minutes” are placed beside the unresolved pressure in “The public question,” giving the speakers one more round to challenge, concede, reframe, and hand off the decision.
场景结束前,“does not become naive”(不会因此变得幼稚)与“submit the approving minutes”(提交批准会议记录)被放回“The public question”尚未解决的压力旁,让说话者再完成一轮质疑、让步、重述与交接。
LOBBYIST
If saying no changes access, status, safety, or the relationship, how can we claim the answer is voluntary, and what must change before asking again?
如果拒绝会改变机会、身份、安全或关系,我们凭什么说回答是自愿的,又必须先改变什么才能再次询问?
WITNESS
I accept that an earlier yes may document one moment, but it does not cover a new audience, a longer duration, hidden pressure, or a changed purpose.
我承认先前的同意只能记录一个时刻,不能覆盖新的受众、更长期限、隐性压力或已经改变的目的。
CHAIR
Then permission will be specific, informed, reversible, and separate from unrelated benefits, with silence treated as a reason to pause rather than agreement.
那么许可必须具体、知情、可撤回,并与无关利益分开;沉默应被视为暂停理由,而不是同意。
LOBBYIST
I will pass on the approved scope, excluded uses, expiration, withdrawal route, and correction contact so no later participant has to guess what was allowed.
我会交接获准范围、排除用途、到期时间、撤回渠道和纠正联系人,让后来的参与者无需猜测哪些内容曾被允许。
The longer dialogue now leaves “The public question” with an acknowledged objection, a revised frame, a named owner, and a handoff that can be checked after the conversation ends.
更长的对话让“The public question”在结束时留下已被承认的异议、经过修订的框架、具名负责人,以及能在谈话结束后继续核验的交接。
The fuller scene treats consent as an informed, reversible process rather than a single line of approval.
更完整的场景把同意视为知情且可撤回的过程,而不是一句单独的批准。
The unanswered question enters the official record with a document deadline.
未被回答的问题连同文件期限一起进入正式记录。
Useful language
高价值表达
does not become naive
/dʌz nɑːt bɪˈkʌm naɪˈiːv/
不会因此变得幼稚
抵抗用身份或语气回避实质问题。
我的例句
what independent valuation
/wʌt ˌɪndɪˈpendənt ˌvæljuˈeɪʃən/
采用了哪份独立估值
追问关联交易价格的外部依据。
我的例句
submit the approving minutes
/səbˈmɪt ði əˈpruːvɪŋ ˈmɪnɪts/
提交批准会议记录
把口头追问转成可核查的文件要求。
我的例句
输出练习
1. 用 2 句英文概括场景中的沟通问题。
2. 选一个高价值表达,改写成你本周可能真正使用的句子。
3. 如果你是场景中的另一方,你会怎样回应?
我能说清场景目标
我能复述关键台词
我写了自己的例句